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Monday, June 14, 2010

Nuther poem!

My mind tends to randomly come up with poems, this one happened when I was folding my laundry....

Avalanche

A cascading torrent of imagination,
A bothersome way of feeling,
Crosses from my world to yours,
From the thoughts of one,
To the eyes of another,
Willfully bring images,
Shutting out a world of worries,
And wandering through the paths of bliss.

8 comments:

  1. Your good at this....

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  2. Uh yeah! Invisi, I think you've found another talent!! :D :D

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  3. me likes your poems very muchly...very ironically sophisticated..

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  4. y thankxew! .....what does ironically sophisticated mean.....? :S

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  5. well, the poems sound sophisticated, and you're..well..not. for the most part....

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  6. Well, that's a nice thing to say! ;) I liked it VERY much, Invisi! :D

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  7. well, I think it's a compliment! I did like it!

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  8. Beautiful poem.... Definition of Poetry: Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

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